Thursday, March 11, 2010

MY HOME!!


The city flows thru the buses, it flocks thru the trains..
It travels through the heart runs thru the veins!!!
It’s an addiction one of its kind;
It never lets u off, it tries to bind!!
You get up at seven sleep at eleven,
Through the day you travel via nether n heaven!!!
The summers are all hot and wet,
No one gives a damn and work through the sweat,
It feels like a pebble flowing down the drains,
You feel like god damned you in these rains!!!
The people around u won’t acknowledge although they have registered,
Noticing without looking is an art they have mastered!
They know no limits for joy sorrow n love,
In the park theatre n malls they flock like dove!!!!
----WIND.
Pavan Wani

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8 comments:

  1. i wish i atleast had a little bit of word power to praise this one..mind blowing!! very true in today's world..

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  2. a good 1 again...talks of ur experiences in dis city... :)

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  3. Too Good Pavan. I know Bombay's life :) Looks like you r too exhausted of Bombay :) Come to USA :P But the way u wrote is....... speechless :)

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  4. I cannot have enough of that city...My birthplace, the place i grew, literally and in every sense.....it made me ME and led me places.....wherever i go whatever i do, I am a Mumbaikar.....

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  5. payal...dont mean to sound rude...but a correction...it's mumbai i m talking about!:)

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  6. some how mumbai is close to my heart as for every mumbaikar!so this poem very well goes with my experience!

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  7. very true...its mumbai meri jaan!!!!!

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